Wonderful writing

We have been writing narratives. We know there is a beginning middle and an end.  Miss Clark gave us a picture and we used it to write our stories.

here is some of our work.  We hope you like it.

The beady-eyed ginger cat with yellow eyes was looking at the mice he is big and greedy and he is starving . The cat had an idea he put his tail down the hole, it couldn’t  reach the mice he had another idea he pulled and pulled but his tail wouldn't  budge . The cute mice chewed wood 1 mouse on the left and 1 mouse on the right they chewed all day and night it was tiring . The mice accidentally bit the cats tail MEAOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Screamed the cat . 1 of the mice said well at least he is out, the other mouse said “yep “. The cat got mad he put his paw down he got both of the mice he pulled them up but his paw was stuck “not again” moaned the cat. The cat gave up and went away with his tail up. The mice giggled.

 

Olivia S

Sophia

 

The orange curly tail cat has yellow and

white eyes.  Its tail is slapping and it wants
to eat the mice.    The mouse got its paw
stuck in the hole.  The cat put a plaster on
his paw.
Sophia

 

The stripy ginger cat has one eye closed. 

It is spying and he is trying to eat the
mice.    Then he put his paw in the hole
then he tried to pull it out. 
Theo

 

The long stripy cat has yellow and orange

eyes.  It is spying and she is looking at the
mice. She got the mouse but the mouse escaped. She tried one more time. She got the mouse. She was happy.
Ella G

 

The ginger stripy cat has yellow eyes.  It is

spying and she is looking at the mice. 
The cat put his paw threw when he pulled
it up he paw was stuck.  He couldn’t get
the mouse. She got her paw stuck in the hole. It hurt. She pulled and pulled. She got it out.
Olivia LH

 

The big stripy cat has big yellow  eyes.  It

is looking and he is spying on the mice  
The cat tried to get the mice but suddenly
he got captured so he cried because he
could not get the mice.
But the cat got his claws in a net. He wrecked the net and he got the mice and he ate the mice.
Sam

 

The big blond cat has one open eye.  It is
spying and he is watching the mice. He
could not eat the mice because the hole
was too small. So he went outside and got a stick and had something to eat.

Keiran 

 

 

The big orange cat has big yellow eyes.  It

is looking and he is wanting to eat the
mice.  The cat got his tail stuck in the
hole. The mouse came out the hole. The cat said “Meow”. he cat made up with mouse. They became friends.

Ryder

 

The long stripy cat has light yellow eyes. 

It is spying and she wants to eat the mice. 
The cat could eat the mice because the
hole was to little for the cat to fit in but the
mouse was the only one who could fit in the hole. The cat got her tail to try and get the mouse wrapped up in her tail. So she could eat it. But she couldn’t get it.

 Cori

The long ginger cat has light golden eyes. 

It is spying and she is looking at the mice. 
The cat fell from the stairs and she came up the stairs and she hurt herself. The cat came up the stairs. He watched the stairs so he wouldn’t fall down the stairs. The mice made up with the cat. The mice made a big hole for the cat to go in. The mice gave the cat some food.

Madelaine 

The   stripy cat has golden yellow eyes.  It is spying and he is trying to eat the mice but the mice hide from him. The  cat  got a stick and he poked the mice and then  he caught the  mice and then the cat ate the mice

Travis 

The orange striped cat has little yellow

eyes.  It is spying on the mice and he is
crying at the mice.  The cat didn’t catch
the mice because the hole was little and the cat just looked. The cat flicked the mice and he missed .The mouse came out.

Ishan 

The big cat is ginger. It has big whiskers and it has a long tail . He was looking down at the mice. He wanted to eat the mice up. He has brown stripes. The problem was his hand got stuck in the hole. The mice put cheese on his claws.

 Karley

The big fat cat is looking at the mice and he has yellow eyes and he has brown stripes. The big fat cat put his tail down the hole and the mice put his tail in the cheese and put gum under the cheese.

 Liam

 

The big fat yellow eyed cat is spying on the mice. The mice laughed at him. The cat put his paw down the hole .The mice put stinky cheese over his paw .He thought he got a mouse. He pulled his paw out, it was stuck. He felt sad.

Leighton 

Once upon a time there was a cat and he belonged to Alex. There was mice too. His paw got stuck. He couldn’t get it out, he tried and tried.

 Kate

The big fat cat is spying down the stairs to see the mice. The mice laughed at the big fat cat because he couldn’t get them. The problem was he got his head stuck in the hole and there was cheese on the roof. It got on him .He was covered in it.

Ella D

He has brown stripes and it’s a cat looking to find the mice and he’s looking in a tiny hole. His got stuck in a cat trap. He was angry and he was scratching wood.

Christain